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Dot purishi sailor(?) Jumper skirt from Angelic Pretty
(No clue for what "purishi stands for;; )
Pop Dot Ribbon from AP too.


I love plain Baby desings, but lately I'm becoming much of a fan of sweet AP clothes, though this one has no a print at all, the ones with prints are too much work for lazy me OTL (The real one of this one has dots;; )

I wanted to do a Lolita all dressed in blue, but when saw the red jumper skirt fall in love with it ;; so red Lolita


God, I want to buy those clothes ;A;!

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:iconkitton:
Very adorable picture! I think she has great style :) Love those stripey stockings, and I'm pretty sure I own that bow! I think the hair has great shape and I like how you repeated that twirly style with the clouds, which really helps draw the piece together. I really love the colours, but I am a sucker for warm colours! The pose is fun and casual without cluttering the pic and works well with the simple, loose style of this. The flow is really great, especially with the clouds trailing up like that. I really like the linear weight you have introduced with the lineart, and my suggestion would be to exaggerate that more in the future, especially with thinner lines. While it's truly just an opinion of style, I would also prefer to see the lines get thin instead of disapear completely. That is obviously part of your style and something that you did on purpose, but to me it just makes it feel more "sketchy" and even though this is a fairly carefree piece I think being mindful of these small details is what makes artwork look more complete and professional!
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:iconohmykira:
Nice! I love the outfit and background.

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Thanks you so much ww!!

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:iconmsm297:
Cute
Totally Love it ^^ ..

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XD Np <3

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Thanks you a lot!!

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:iconkyatia:
very cute! nice job~^ ^

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:iconflashart-zad:
Sugoi... Cute(>A<;) ... (TT^TT) oh man...What a nice job. Can I remake this? come visit my DA if you got time (if you dont mind...)

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:iconkimera-kuiroaki:
Awww k hermoso el dibujoooo >w<
Me encantan sus ropas <3

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